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The word lingers in the air of basement, far away ice cream makers are buzzing and the sea wind blows outside...
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The word lingers in the air of the yard, as far away dogs are barking, further yet the sound of motor traffic...
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"That's for us to find out. But this -- it will make finding them just a little easier."
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"To put him out of his misery?" He thinks. "It's possible, but it does not explain all the other dubious things here -- lack of struggle primarily. I may be intellectually sloppy, but I prefer one theory at a time. And this just smacks of treatment to me."
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He nods. "I had my doubts -- there were no signs of a struggle on his hands. No claw marks on his neck. But still..."
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His brow furrows while his eyes glaze over. The lieutenant looks regretful for not figuring this out before.
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He's proposing the bullet was the real cause of death -- and the hanging an attempt to conceal this fact.
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"Yes. And the belt around his neck; the hanging; even dragging him to the yard... all of it was done after this man was already dead."
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"I have had this doubt since I inspected his hands, officer -- there were no signs of struggle. No claw marks on his neck. Why? Why didn't he fight for his life?"
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"I've had this doubt since you showed me the tracks, officer. We could not account for why they carried him over -- why not march him? There was no satisfying explanation."
"I've had this doubt since you pointed out the lividity was faint. They know we do it -- analyze hypostasis. I have had perpetrators manipulate the body position before."
"I've had this doubt since you had your hunch, officer. That he was doing something else at the time of his death. I don't have that kind of intuition myself -- and I don't usually trust it. But it made me... doubt."
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- "I have had this doubt since I inspected his hands, officer -- there were no signs of struggle. No claw marks on his neck. Why? Why didn't he fight for his life?"
- "I did not just come up with this. I've had my doubts since we found no signs of struggle on his wrists. No claw marks on his neck -- why? Why didn't he fight for his life?"
- "I have had my doubts for a while now. Since I saw there were no signs of struggle on his hands. And no claw marks on his neck..."
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"There have been other signs too, small details. Everything is too neatly designed for us to assign probable cause here. As we did, foolhardily. Well -- no more."
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"There have been other signs too, small things. We were right not to assign hanging as cause of death. As the perpetrators expected we would -- no such luck for them."
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"I did not just come up with this. I've had my doubts since we found no signs of struggle on his wrists. No claw marks on his neck -- why? Why didn't he fight for his life?"
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"I did not just come up with this. I've had my doubts since you showed me the tracks, officer. Why did they carry him over -- why not march him? There is no satisfactory explanation."
"I did not just come up with this. I've had my doubts since you said the lividity was faint. They know we do it -- analyze hypostasis. I have had perpetrators manipulate the body position before."
"I did not just come up with this. I've had my doubts since you told me about that hunch, officer. Him doing something else when he died. I don't have intuition -- I don't usually trust it. But it made me doubt."
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"I have had my doubts for a while now. Since I saw there were no signs of struggle on his hands. And no claw marks on his neck..."
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"I have had my doubts since you showed me the tracks. Why did they carry him over -- why not march him, I thought. There was no satisfying explanation."
"I have had my doubts since you pointed out the lividity was faint. They know we analyze hypostasis. I have had perpetrators manipulate the body position before."
"I have had my doubts about this since you told me he was doing something else. At the time of his death. I don't have that kind of intuition -- I don't usually trust it. But it made me... doubt."
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"As I said, treatment is an attempt to manipulate the body after death -- to hide the real cause with a false cause. In this case..."
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"Treatment, officer, is an attempt to manipulate the body after death -- to hide the real cause with a false cause. In this case..."
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He's proposing the bullet was the real cause of death -- and the hanging an attempt to conceal this fact.
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"This concurs with the Hardie boys story -- and Klaasje's."
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"Wasn't that what we thought the last time?"
"Wasn't that what we thought the last time?" (Shake the gloves clean.)
"Wasn't that what we thought the last time?" (Clean your hand in the handkerchief.)
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"That was then. This time we have extensive tissue destruction away from the wound track. This time we have a bullet."
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You pick the object between your index and middle finger. It feels sharp, like metal. With your face twisting from pain and concentration, all you need to do is just...
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You pick the sharp, metal bullet between your index and middle finger. With your face twisting from pain and concentration, all you need to do is just...
You pick the object between your index and middle finger. Feels sharp, like metal. You press your teeth together, your jaw is clenched. All you need to do is just...
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The inside of the head feels cold and smooth like a glove as you pull out, sweat dripping down your brow -- careful not to lose the prize between your fingers...
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With a plop, your hand emerges from the mouth, covered in blood up to the wrist. Between your fingers -- a small flower, a blossom made of lead!
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With a plop, your hand emerges from the mouth, covered in blood up to the wrist. Between your fingers -- a small flower, a blossom made of lead!
With a plop, your hand emerges from the mouth. The garden glove is covered in blood right up to the wrist. Between your fingers -- a small flower, a blossom made of lead!
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The bullet falls in the bag leaving a smattering of blood on the plastic. He raises the bag under his eyes and says:
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"Of course. You've earned it." The lieutenant drops the bag in your bloody hand. It feels light.
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"Of course. You deserve it." The lieutenant drops the bag in your hand. It feels light.